Sunday, August 11, 2013

The Fallen Angel



Have you ever wished that you had your own angel?  If so, how would you treat the angel if your wish was granted? In a short story titled “A Very Old Man with Enormous Wings” by Gabriel Garcia Marquez, a family in poverty receives a very rare visitor from the heavens. This visitor is an old man which is an angel that has wings and speaks in a strange dialect. Although this family receives an amazing visitor, they do not treat him like a proper guest. I do not believe treating your guest to horrible conditions is the right thing to do even if the guest is unusual. I believe the old man should have received better conditions even if the family was in poverty.      

The man was given very poor living conditions. For example, Pelayo locks the man in a chicken’s coop. Along with poor living conditions, the guest received great disrespect. The family turned the man into a public attraction, charging money to witness his unusual deformities. The man was also malnourished and mistreated by the crowd. The crowd  does this the man by burning him with an iron, and yelling at him so that he would move. After the fame, the man receives no gratitude from the family for helping them overcome poverty. The man did not exist to the family after he was no longer an attraction. The family went on with their lives until one day the man began to regain his ability to fly. He had to hide his wings from the family as they grew because he was like the family’s prisoner. The man eventually regained his ability to fly. The rehabilitated guest immediately left the place immediately with no goodbyes to his improper hosts.       

Although the man was of an unknown origin, the family should have at the least greeted the man properly. Instead, the family made no attempt to communicate with the angel. I believe you should always treat your guest with respect and proper conditions.

WORKS CITED: García, Márquez Gabriel. Very Old Man with Enormous Wings. Print.

10 comments:

  1. You did really good on your writing, good job!

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  2. Amazing Cole! This post is very detailed and I love it. The details are very percise. Kee[ up the good work!

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  3. This piece of writing was excellent and very well thought through. I completely agree with you on your ideas. Also I like the vocabulary you used.

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  4. I agree that the angel should have been treated better. I would also like to add that this post is very good and contains great detail.

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  5. You are completely right on how they treated the old man. I do agree that they should have treated him better than what they did. I like how you went into great detail for the people who did not read the story or were unable to read the story.

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  6. I enjoy reading this. Treating people in such a terrible way is harsh and no one deserve to be treated like dirty. You did a good job, Cole :)

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  7. I agree, the characters treated the old man very harshly. You made some good points that drew from the text, and I really enjoyed it!

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  8. good job very precise details.why treat the rare man like that if they believed he was an angel?

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  9. I agree completely, the angel was treated very hash. They should of treated the angel better, and treated him like they wanted to be treated. You also made some very good points and did a great job on your writing.

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  10. Why should this stranger be treated more nicely? this family was poor. what could they have done. their child was ill? why was he their worries? Really good points though. good job cole!!

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